Monday, October 12, 2009

Wish I too hAD a G***Friend

Sitting idle on my lappy having nothing to do,

Decided to login Orkut, Gtalk and YAHOO,

No Comments on my photos, no girl online on Gtalk,

Ohh my GOD!! There is no one at my heart to knock.

My roomie was delirious as night calling rates are further down,

Already enough reasons and one more reason to FROWN.

A thought of reading newspaper came to my mind,

But till then there was another available of a new kind.

Thinking when will GOD bestow me with DIVIDEND??

Will that day ever come when I too will have a G***Friend.

On a clear moonlight expecting my *STAR* to shine

When I will proudly say that she’smine.

At last, I got depressed and have nothing more to say,

Said GUDNITE to someone thinking where there’s WILL there’s the way.

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16 comments:

  1. parivartanOctober 12, 2009 at 10:31 AM

    yehi line milega milega..
    bahot sahi Nivesh bhai!!!
    aane de aane de..!!

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  2. parivartanOctober 12, 2009 at 10:34 AM

    oh..i forgot to mention:
    pankh hote toh udd aati re!!!

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  3. Apurva NahataOctober 12, 2009 at 10:37 AM

    baut sahi sirjee.. keep it up

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  4. Wild StrikerOctober 12, 2009 at 10:58 AM

    nice1 dude.....u'll surely get her someday....maybe u'll find her in NM

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  5. AnkurOctober 12, 2009 at 12:19 PM

    Style to rangin hai, phir bhi dil kyon ab tak gamgin hai? :-)

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  6. Salvo4uOctober 12, 2009 at 12:50 PM

    Baba jee ka frustration kahan nikelega yeh to mujhe nahi pata par ek din tumhe ladkee zaroooooooorrrrrrrrr milege hahaha

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  7. UnknownOctober 12, 2009 at 1:16 PM

    sahi jaa raha hai Arora... NM ki bandiya ab tere se nhi bach paayengi!!!

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  8. how can i explore ME...October 12, 2009 at 10:19 PM

    gud going......just look around may be she is sitting next 2 u......:P...

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  9. ashuOctober 12, 2009 at 11:33 PM

    bhai,, isi tarah likhte rahe to zaroor mil jayegi.. keep writing... best wishes... :)

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  10. VibhuOctober 12, 2009 at 11:35 PM

    height of creativity.....or frustration...
    whatever it is....
    this poem rocks....god plz grls away frm him :):)..so that we could get few more gud poem.
    @nivesh....thoda sabr to kar mere yaar,thoda saans to le dildaar

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  11. Ashwin P AnandOctober 12, 2009 at 11:47 PM

    Good God..u give girlfriends to soo many useless crap guys...For the nice and creative guy is,pls give him a girlfriend :-)

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  12. Himanshu AroraOctober 13, 2009 at 1:14 AM

    i knw nivesh from d very beginning wen he joined school.From dat day to tdy we had spent good and bad moments together.We enjoyed life,fight wid each other and ofcourse persuaded each other as well.One thing which i notice everytym n possibly u also notice him dat this person is really soft spoken but his action is completely opposite.This tym he is going to prove himself by his action not by his words.I believe gils in NMIMS surely think sthg abt nivesh bcuz my frnd is beautiful by heart n he wrote down his feeling to make d stone unturned.

    Ur wish is soon be granted my frnd...u awesome .....

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  13. Ladoooo.... :) :)October 16, 2009 at 7:54 AM

    apne dukh aur vicharo ka bahut acha samanway kia h...amazing!

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  14. contactnirbhayOctober 22, 2009 at 9:59 AM

    ke baat hai CHEETEH
    sahi ja raha hai
    acha hai tune hum sab ki bhavnao ko poem me utar diya

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  15. SOMOctober 23, 2009 at 2:53 AM

    Sahi hai beta , lage raho..

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  16. UnknownDecember 31, 2009 at 9:20 AM

    nice ha...very intense i must say :P

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